Question by Alex: English native speakers, please help!?
Please check my text that I want to put on my web page! I think I have some mistakes there! Maybe better say some things differently?
Hi, my name is Aleksei.
I’m a freelance software and web developer, based in Tallinn, Estonia. I also have my own freelance company in UK. I have been working for clients from all over the world. I have overall 11 years of experience in design and IT and 4 years purely in .NET environment. I am primarily using Microsoft technologies and products for development. I am also a Microsoft Certified Professional Developer
As I am comfortable with both design and development needs, I enjoy the challenge of balancing client and business needs in order to achieve the best outcome possible. Whether it may be for personal or for business use, I can help you find your style and design a website that fits your product or service.
If you’re looking for a sudden injection of .NET web development expertise, please do not hesitate to contact me!
Key Technical Skills
I am experienced in the following Software and Technologies:
Databases: SQL Server 2008-6.5, Microsoft Access, Oracle, XML.
Other Skills: I am pretty handy with all the usual applications (MS Visual Studio, MS Expression Blend, Adobe Photoshop, Illustrator, Dreamweaver etc etc), and from time to time I’ve been known to illustrate and design for print. I also have an experience in photography and 3D rendering and animation using 3D MAX and V-Ray.
Download the latest version of my C.V. (.pdf document).
Download list of my previous development projects (.pdf document).
Answer by TC
i think it sounds pretty good. maybe have more space between lines especially in the second paragraph so it is easier to read. there is nothing wrong with your english
maybe list or bullet point your “other skills”
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